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Object o1 by ~hermit-homeboy:iconhermit-homeboy:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Still Life

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Thought I posted this here already...

This one's kinda incomplete because I didn't finish the cup in the back.

I thought this was okay but felt it was missing something that would make it better. Then the teacher suggested that I should add more darker tones. I think he's right.

Any suggestions/comments/critiques you may have are welcome as well.

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~aLyrist Jun 2, 2009, 12:37:41 PM
Darker tones, yeah, would give it a bit more depth. And possibly something in the background, if just shading to show it's there, unless it's up against a white wall?

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*PhysicRodrigo Jun 3, 2009, 7:44:05 PM
It's very good! I like the way you made the transparency of certain bottles, while others do appear like solid plastic! Good shading, too!

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~hermit-homeboy Jun 4, 2009, 8:40:53 PM
Yeah, it's a white wall. :hmm:

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Fear does not hold me back, Lazyness does.
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~hermit-homeboy Jun 4, 2009, 9:34:32 PM
Thanks.
I was a little hesitant to do clear plastic because I haven't done it before. But I took a chance and I'm happy with how that turned out.

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Fear does not hold me back, Lazyness does.
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*PhysicRodrigo Jun 6, 2009, 5:40:59 PM
Hehehe welcome! It's good to dare and try new things :wave:

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"If mankind does not put an end to war, war will put an end to mankind" John F. Kennedy, Democrat
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